...where am i going wrong?

[distorter]

..ok, i inquired about a week ago about a story i'm writing, and the use of tenses (past and present) ...i posted a segment of the story, and received some great feedback...specifically from "tdol"....anyway, i would really like someone to read the 9 pages i wrote... although the segment that i posted appeared to have nothing wrong it (tense usage), the rest of the story is questionable... i would really like for someone to read it and give me feedback on the completed 9 pages...is there anyone out there that will do this for me? ... it would be greatly appreciated, as i'm anxious to make some progress before i move on with the following chapters this summer....=-)

thanks, and hope to hear from someone, soon

paul j.

[Tdol]

Put it up and see.

[distorter]

anyone's thoughts surrounding my use of tenses would be greatly appreciated....=-) ....especially yours, tdol

paul


....i'm having trouble posting the attachment....hhhhmmm ....it's a word document with a ".doc" extension......hhhhmmmm

[distorter]

....trying again


gggrrrrrrrr!!!!!

[distorter]

....i keep getting a warning after i command the attachment to upload

[Tdol]

Can't you just post the text up?

[distorter]

i suppose....but it's 9 pages.....but, i'll give it a shot as soon as i get home, today....=-)

[Red5]

Can you please post the warning so I can see what's happening?

[distorter]

this is the warning i'm getting......

Warning: filesize(): open_basedir restriction in effect. File(/tmp/phpDeGTZL) is not within the allowed path(s): (/home/usingengliuk/public_html) in /includes/functions_file.php on line 286

[Red5]

I think I've fixed the problem.