Good afternoon, bikramsingh.
(1) I think that your sentence is find from a grammatical viewpoint.
(a) I would just add "that" after "are."
(b) I put a period after "independently."
(c) I would say "we will all reach."
(2) As to the thought of your statement, I am sad to say that it reflects something very true about life.
Have a nice day!
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