IELTS, letter. Please can u check it. I have one week left for exam.

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Write a letter to your supervisor regarding a course you attended as a part of your job. In your letter include the following:
- explain purpose of your letter,
- say how the course was useful to you,
-what are your suggestions regarding the course.




Dear Mr Sullivan.

I would like to express my gratitude for allowing me to attend the two week course on Field journalism. I beleive that the course has achieved its’ goal. The content of the course was rich and the academic part was followed by practice and interactive discussions. At the end of the course all of the participants presented projects on how to improve the work of field journalists and freelancers.

Personally, I found this course very useful. I have gained all of the necessary academic and practicals skills that are needed for the work of succesful journalists. I am sure that in my work I can make use of these experiences.

Mr Sullivan, I hope that such courses will be held again in the near future. If courses are planned I would like to suggest organizing workshops on Social networking. As social networks like Twitter, Facebook and many others are starting to play a significant role in the distribution of information, I think it would be interesting for all of my colleagues to learn more about social networking and its' role.

Thank you very much for your time and your attention to this matter.


With best regards,

John James.