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[Tan Elaine]

Though it is sad to see people who refuse to accept X religion or stop their practice halfway, so long as we do our best to encourage them compassionately to keep believing in the religion, in the end if they give up or do not believe, it is not our fault.

Are there any errors in the above text? If there are, please rephrase it for me.

Thanks in advance.

[Tan Elaine]

Though it is sad to see people who refuse to accept X religion or stop their practice halfway, so long as we do our best to encourage them compassionately to keep believing in the religion, in the end if they give up or do not believe, it is not our fault.

Are there any errors in the above text? If there are, please rephrase it for me.

Thanks in advance.

Could some member/s please help.

Thanks.

[bhaisahab]

Though it is sad to see people who refuse to accept X religion or stop their practice halfway, so long as we do our best to encourage them compassionately to keep believing in the religion, in the end if they give up or do not believe, it is not our fault.

Are there any errors in the above text? If there are, please rephrase it for me.

Thanks in advance.

Though it is sad to see people who refuse to accept X religion, or stop their practice halfway; so long as we do our best to encourage them compassionately to keep believing, in the end if they give up or do not believe, it is not our fault.