please check my formal letter

[mostafaghoreishi]

from:
MOSTAFA GHOREISHI
FINAL YEAR B-PHARMACY
TO:
THE PRINCIPAL OF SRIPMS

Respected sir
As i need to stay in my country for treatment of my ear infection ,i would be appreciate of you if you would give a permission to my friend to fill the application letter for my hall ticket.
with the best of regards.
your sincerely
mostafa

[emsr2d2]

from:
MOSTAFA GHOREISHI
FINAL YEAR B-PHARMACY
TO:
THE PRINCIPAL OF SRIPMS

Respected Dear Sir

As I need to stay remain in my country for medical treatment of my ear infection, I would be appreciate it of you if you would give a permission to for my friend to fill in the my application letter for my a hall ticket.

with the best of regards.
Yours sincerely faithfully

Mostafa

See above.