The sentence is taken from a response I made to a posting:
"The 'matter' is whatever is at issue[:][;] for example, the matter could be a dispute between two parties."
I used to write ';' where 'for example' links clauses, but I've recently been converted to ':'. Maybe I should just cop out and use the dash? And isn't a full-stop possible here?
And what about straightforward lists:
"I've been to many countries: for example, Russia, India ...."?
Is a colon (or more informally, the dash) the only possibility here (assuming the sentence ends at the end of the list)?
*Not a teacher
-The 'matter' is whatever is at issue[:][;] for example, the matter could be a dispute between two parties.
I would write 'The matter is whatever is at issue. For example, the matter could be a dispute between two parties'.
-I've been to many countries: Russia, India
I would definitely say 'I've been to many countries: Russia, India, etc.'
I would add this is a way of writing. Some would rephrase it while others would write it in the same way or so. I stumbled upon several styles of writing: orginal ones, structured ones, uncorrect ones, etc. To me, the purpose is to be understood, perfectly.
Last edited by philadelphia; 15-Jul-2010 at 08:27.
Thanks for that. And sorry, my 2nd sentence ('I've been to many countries ...') wasn't a very good example of what I was trying to illustrate, but going back to the first sentence: if both semi-colon and colon are possible, is there any difference in function? Does the colon announce, and the semi-colon balance, what follows?
This link explains it clearly: 410 Grammar: Using Colons and Semi-Colons
Here it is! I could have written it differently: 'Some would rephrase it; others would write it in the same way or so'.
That being said, I read J-P Sartre's books and they blew me away regarding the way he wrote. When you read his book, you cannot help yourself reading as there is a kind of high pace. In other words, if you stop reading, you get lost. He keeps using appropriate punctuations to give a great pace to the words and the phrases as well! Read The words
Last edited by philadelphia; 15-Jul-2010 at 09:01.
I'm clear on most uses of the colon and semi-colon[. - I know, for instance, that this could be a semi-colonbut choose the full-stop partly because I use a semi-colon in the next clause] I'm less clear on cases where either is possible[; - like here?] for example, where sentences seem to be in balance and yet a colon can be used. For instance:
'Man proposes: God disposes.'
I'd use a semi-colon there and I can't see how a colon can be used.
Thanks. That's exactly why I'd use the semi-colon in the example - meaning 'on the other hand'. It's the colon I've got a problem with!
I would never use a colon nor a semi-colon in that case. It would rather go: 'Man proposes, God disposes'. When the phrases are short, I mainly use a comma; when the phrases are not short, I mainly use a semi-colon.
Before 'for example' I would never write a semi-colon. Eg I like three colours; for example, green, red, blue. I prefer as follows: I like three colours: green, red, blue.