gold mining

[bosun]

Hello! If you see any mistakes in the following sentences, can I have your comments?


Even though half of the gold mining were destructed by an earthquake, the supply of gold will be restored as it used to be for the following reasons: first, the demand for jewerly is still increasing . Second, potential companies will continute to invest in gold mining.

[Gillnetter]

Hello! If you see any mistakes in the following sentences, can I have your comments?


Even though half of the gold mining operation were destructed was destroyed by an earthquake, the supply of gold will be restored as it used to be for the following reasons. First, the demand for jewerly is still increasing. Second, potential companies will continute to invest in gold mining. I'm not sure what a "potential" company is. To me it can only mean a company that is not formed yet - it may be a company in the future but is not one now.

Gil