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- 20-Jul-2010, 12:17 #1
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writing Please correct the following sentences in a natural way.
Which is perferable?
1. As soon as I got into my mom's car, the first thing I wanted to do was to visit your home and gave back your digital watch.
2. As soon as I got into my mom's car, I was eager to visit your home and gave back your digital watch.
- 20-Jul-2010, 12:58 #2
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Re: writing Neither.
Originally Posted by contiluo 
As soon as I got into my mum's car, I was eager to visit your home (or visit you at home) and GIVE (you) back your digital watch
- 20-Jul-2010, 13:24 #3
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Teacher Re: writing 1. As soon as I got into my mom's car, the first thing I wanted to do was to visit you and give your digital watch back. Originally Posted by contiluo
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