Paragraph regarding tourism industry which needed improvement.
The tourism industry in the sounthern region of the country boom on the local level and as time go by, it will boom on international level. When the industry boom in local level, it will receive big number of tourist from other part of the country and when it boom on international level, more foreigner will come to the region to visit.
Re: Paragraph regarding tourism industry which needed improvement.
See above. You need to concentrate on using "s" at the ends of plurals and at the end of third person singular verbs.
Originally Posted by michael281001