revising of one sentence 2

[vil]

Dear teachers,

Would you be kind enough to share with me your opinion concerning the following sentence?

Her body was dressed in a soaked, clinging clothes that made her still more charming.

Thanks for your efforts.

Regards,

V

[billmcd]

Dear teachers,

Would you be kind enough to share with me your opinion concerning the following sentence?

Her body was dressed in a soaked, clinging clothes that made her still more charming.

Thanks for your efforts.

Regards,

V

Delete "a".