It makes sense to me.
I would put a comma after 'proud'.
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- 12-Sep-2010, 06:33 #1
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Helppp! Is this a run-on? And if not does it make sense? So i'm not so sure this sentence is making sense. i'm really bad a structuring sentences. I'm basically trying to say how the words an author uses in her story can describe her opinion on what she personally thinks individualism means.
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Analyzing this part of the passage, the reader can assume that the descriptive terms utilized by the author, such as "carefree" and "proud" describe her own personal opinion of individualism.
- 12-Sep-2010, 22:46 #2
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Re: Helppp! Is this a run-on? And if not does it make sense?
- 17-Sep-2010, 01:25 #3
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Re: Helppp! Is this a run-on? And if not does it make sense? kay thank you so much! (:
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