Grammar Question!

[Gaurav_2010]

"If possible try to spare sometime for listening to your favorite music. This will help in remaining mind & mood to be cheerful throughout the day."

Is the above sentence correct. Please help.

Thanks in advance!

[bhaisahab]

"If possible try to spare sometime for listening to your favorite music. This will help in remaining mind & mood to be cheerful throughout the day."

Is the above sentence correct. Please help.

Thanks in advance!

"If possible, try to set aside time to listen to your favourite music. This will help to keep your mood cheerful throughout the day."

[Gaurav_2010]

Thank you so much for your reply :)

[e2e4]

If possible, try to set aside time to listen to your favourite music.

Is it also correct to say

If possible, try to set aside some time for listening your favourite music.

Thanks

[bhaisahab]

If possible, try to set aside time to listen to your favourite music.

Is it also correct to say

If possible, try to set aside some time for listening your favourite music.

Thanks

Yes, it's OK.