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  1. 28-Oct-2010, 15:27 #1
    runbabyrun
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    Default please help me correct this sentence

    Ann's achievement exceeded that achieved by most of the students starting at a higher level.


    Does the above sentence work?
    Is it clear enouhg? Is it odd?
    How to make it better?
  2. 28-Oct-2010, 18:06 #2
    Rover_KE
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    Default Re: please help me correct this sentence

    Ann's achievement exceeded that of most of the students starting at a higher level...
    ...would be better in my opinion.

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