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Could someone correct my message below or restucture it in the more proper manner.
Maintenance will carry out some air piping works on 4/4/2004 ( in QA lab. Therefore, the air compressor will be shutting down on the said day. Please don't plan any overtime on that day.
Maintenance will be carrying out air-piping on 4/4/2004 in the QA lab. The air compressor will be shut down so please don't plan any overtime on that day.
Could someone correct my message below or restucture it in the more proper manner.
Maintenance will carry out some air piping works on 4/4/2004 ( in QA lab. Therefore, the air compressor will be shutting down on the said day. Please don't plan any overtime on that day.
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