Anything wrong with this sentence? Thanks again! T_T

This is the beginning part of an informal letter to a pen-friend. ( Is it grammatically correct? ) Thanks for proof-reading, everyone! T_T

This summer, I went to Thailand with my maid and my sister to visit our cousin.

I am so happy that my cousin has introduced me my to two little girls and one baby boy. They were all very cute.

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Originally Posted by Helped Wanted

This is the beginning part of an informal letter to a pen-friend. ( Is it grammatically correct? ) Thanks for proof-reading, everyone! T_T

This summer, I went to Thailand with my maid and my sister to visit our cousin.

I am so happy that my cousin has introduced me my to two little girls and one baby boy. They were all very cute.

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The first sentence is fine if the same person is a cousin to you, your maid and your sister.

In the second sentence, it would be better if you mention the relationship of the children to the speaker (you).

Perhaps:

• My cousin introduced me to three of my young cousins--two little girls and a baby boy. They are all very cute.

What do you think?

:)

Thanks very much, Ronbee! ^o^

You're quite welcome.

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