 Please read the whole context and answer me(2)
Dear teacher,
I am Typing the whole context of second letter with teacher's correction in brackets.
dear zaffar,
I recieved your letter today and decided, at once, to write a letter to you. My dear friend, i am glad to hear that at last you have decided to settle down with a girl and have your own family. Zaffar, you are right in saying that matters like boy and girl age should be of minor importance(age difference is of minor importance).Despite the fact that the girl is very charming, you must think twice before settling down with her. If you reach to a decision that her age won't come in your way, than go ahead and get engaged with her as soon as possible.
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