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  1. 29-Jul-2005, 23:13 #1
    truedua
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    Cool plz correct them

    Hello..........
    Please take your tea otherwise it'll be cold.
    I looked at him, similing.
    Don't speak while taking your meal.
    thanks
  2. 30-Jul-2005, 04:48 #2
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    Default Re: plz correct them

    Please take your tea, otherwise it'll be cold.
    Very good! But I added a comma.

    I looked at him, smiling.
    Perfect again! Nice sentence... I read your sentence, smiling.

    Don't speak while EATING your meal.
    You don't TAKE meals, you EAT them.

    Very good English!
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