is this sentence correct?

[indonica]

Hi everyone! Can I use "holding" like this in the following sentence?

I would like to seek a position in the following Eru Logistics training that the American Red Cross will be holding on October 7th, 2011.

Thank you.

[azcl]

***Not a teacher***

I would like to seek a position in the following Eru Logistics training that the American Red Cross will be holding on October 7th, 2011.

This looks fine to me apart from the use of 'following'. I think it is more likely you mean 'approaching' or 'next' (but can't say for sure without more detail on the context). I also don't know what 'Eru Logistics training' is, and wonder whether it should be 'ERU Logistics training course' or something like that?

Hope this helps

Ade