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Please kindly advise us with Mr. xy contact numbers who is going to join the vessel at our port because he hasn't contacted our office yet for his embarkation prearrangements
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Please advise us of Mr. Xy's contact number(s). He is going to join the vessel at our port, but he hasn't contacted our office yet for his embarkation pre-arrangements.
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