
Originally Posted by
gsrullz
Hello friends
Can anyone of you please correct the bold words in the text if they are wrong?
I want to know if I have used the tenses correct
I have tried so many times to find a way to communicate(with) her. OK - Include "with".
I have sent her 2 two messages on Facebook but she has not answered either of it them yet and I think she never will because I'm sure that when she's online in/on Facebook she doesn't look into her inbox.
I had once once had a chance on logging into (I would use "to log on") onto my friend's account, who is a friend of hers on Facebook. He had permitted me to log into onto his Facebook account and send her a message and see if she would reply.
I sent her the a message from my friend's account and she hasn't answered it neither either. No answers has have come back since then. Then I thought about getting her phone number and trying to send her a text message
Now in this text
1)Have I used the tenses correct?
2)Are the words "neither", "log into", "since then" correctly used?
3)I am not sure if this part is correct:I had once a chance on logging into my friends account
Sorry that it's a bit long but your generous helps help will improve my English a lot!