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    gsrullz is offline Newbie
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    Hello friends
    Can anyone of you please correct the bold words in the text if they are wrong?
    I want to know if I have used the tenses correct

    I have tried so many times to find a way to communicate(with) her.
    I have sent her 2 messages on Facebook but she has not answered either of it yet and I think she never will because I'm sure when she's online in/on Facebook she doesn't look into her inbox.
    I had once a chance on logging into my friends account who is a friend of hers on Facebook.He had permitted me to log into his facebook account and send her a message and see if she would reply.
    I sent her the message from my friend's account and she hasn't answered it neither.No answers has come back since then.Then I thought about getting her phone number and try to send her a text message

    Now in this text
    1)Have I used the tenses correct?
    2)Are the words "neither", "log into", "since then" correctly used?
    3)I am not sure if this part is correct:I had once a chance on logging into my friends account

    Sorry that it's a bit long but your generous helps will improve my English a lot!

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    Gillnetter is offline Key Member
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    Default Re: sentence corrections"

    Quote Originally Posted by gsrullz View Post
    Hello friends
    Can anyone of you please correct the bold words in the text if they are wrong?
    I want to know if I have used the tenses correct

    I have tried so many times to find a way to communicate(with) her. OK - Include "with".

    I have sent her 2 two messages on Facebook but she has not answered either of it them yet and I think she never will because I'm sure that when she's online in/on Facebook she doesn't look into her inbox.
    I had once once had a chance on logging into (I would use "to log on") onto my friend's account, who is a friend of hers on Facebook. He had permitted me to log into onto his Facebook account and send her a message and see if she would reply.
    I sent her the a message from my friend's account and she hasn't answered it neither either. No answers has have come back since then. Then I thought about getting her phone number and trying to send her a text message

    Now in this text
    1)Have I used the tenses correct?
    2)Are the words "neither", "log into", "since then" correctly used?
    3)I am not sure if this part is correct:I had once a chance on logging into my friends account

    Sorry that it's a bit long but your generous helps help will improve my English a lot!
    Gil

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