
15-Aug-2005, 00:27
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Re: A question on 'too...to'! Quote: |
Originally Posted by Casiopea Hmm. I agree with Szymon. It's positive. But . . . the sentence itself is a little hard to wade through.  How about making it less wordy?  Here's how I read it  - it took me a few seconds to figure out what you were trying to say,
Your findings show that Megellan's performance is good, so the fact that it's popular, or was selected as the best fund, doesn't seem to be based on chance.
Is that correct?
Note, 'still' is a wee awkward. Try setting it off with commas or moving it after 'was'.  | Casiopea, Thanks a lot for the suggestion! It's not my own sentence and I was feeling hard to digest the paper because of the long, wordy sentences. Joe |