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Thread: is this sentence correct?
- 15-Mar-2011, 08:03 #1
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is this sentence correct? We have reserved space for you this week, please advise when will the goods to be finished rework and the expected inspection schedule today.
- 15-Mar-2011, 09:29 #2
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Teacher Re: is this sentence correct? No, it's not correct, Zoe.
Please explain in simple terms what you want to say.
You keep using business terms like please advise when please let us know would be plainer.
Rover
- 15-Mar-2011, 10:10 #3
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Threadstarter / Original Poster Re: is this sentence correct? Hi Rover,
Please see the following revision
Please advise reworked schedule. The goods are require to ship before 18 March
Kindly to double-check
Regards
Zoe
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