My first essay, can someone read it for me pls.and tell me if its conversational

[ifrah ali]

what is the difference between conversational and formal essay.

[Route21]

Hi ifrah ali

Don't seem to have a copy of your essay attached to the posting? Suggest you re-submit with a copy of the content "cut and pasted" into the message.

Although not a teacher, I would expect a conversational essay would be written in the style of English that you might use if chatting to a friend including informal words (such as "I'd", "wouldn't" etc), whereas a formal essay would use more formal English (the equivalent words being "I would", "I would not").

Hope this helps
R21