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    Default Please help to modify the sentence

    Per the factory, 2 pcs ABC are missing and 2 pcs BNC are more from the last shipment. Due to a few quantites for BNC, we would sugguest to printing the instruction book by themselves, because there have MOQ from the printer.

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    Default Re: Please help to modify the sentence

    Hi Zoe

    According to the factory, 2 pcs of ABC are missing and there are 2 extra pcs of BNC from the last shipment. As the extra number of BNC items is small, we would suggest the factory print the additional instruction books themselves as they have already received the MOQ from the printers.

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    Last edited by Route21; 22-Mar-2011 at 13:09. Reason: further thoughts.
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