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[Ashiuhto]

Which of the following sentences is acceptable? Which is better?

(1) Each of the customers can get a cute candle for free tomorrow.
(2) Every custmer can get a free cute candle tomorrow.
(3) Each customer can get a cute candle for free tomorrow.

[freezeframe]

Which of the following sentences is acceptable? Which is better?

(1) Each of the customers can get a cute candle for free tomorrow.
(2) Every custmer can get a free cute candle tomorrow.
(3) Each customer can get a cute candle for free tomorrow.

They're all possible. But 1. is too cumbersome. I would say 2. is the better version.

Also, "cute" to modify "candle" sounds strange. But I don't know what kind of candles you have there.

[allenman]

In this case use (3).

Native but not a teacher

[5jj]

Both #2 and #3 sound fine for me, though I would prefer 'every' to 'each' in #3.

To me, 'every' is closer in nuance to 'all', and thus sounds more generous here. I'd also omit 'can' and just write 'gets' - it's more direct.