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    Post Kindly help me to correct these sentences

    As we are planning to do the medical treatment under your consulting, we need to know when we should come. Should we plan after three months has been completed?
    However, we do not want to do any further treatment here after twelve weeks because of previous loss.
    We were planned in the beginning, the treatment would have been done in our home town as early as possible, but unfortunately we couldn’t make it out.
    We were totally confused about the decision for travel once this scenario has been noticed that is why we advised your opinion.

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    Default Re: Kindly help me to correct these sentences

    Annecy.
    Without knowing more about your situation I can only guess what parts of your text, like "previous loss" and "couldn't make it out", might mean. However I have made a few guesses and perhaps this re-write will be helpful for you.

    As we are planning to have the medical treatment under your consultancy, we need to know when we should come. Should we plan to do so in three months time? We do not want to have any further treatment here after the three month period because of previous difficulties.
    Our original plan was that the treatment would have been done in our home town as early as possible, but unfortunately we couldn't arrange this. In our current situation we are confused as to what our travel arrangements should be, which is why we have asked for your advice.

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    Last edited by JMurray; 10-Apr-2011 at 04:35.
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