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This process of urbanization in these countries has produced political elites based on interests and ideologies rather than families or tribes. Mr. B.A and Mr. M were surrounded by such elites that had no family ties to them. In contrast, in most of the other countries in the region, the king or the president rules the country through his tribe which consists of some thousands people who hold key governmental or military positions and take part in the decision making. They support the head of the state not necessarily out of admiration for his personality or his regime, but for the survival of their tribe and its individuals. They know for sure that if he falls they will fall together with him. We have seen a typical example of this in [a name of a country], in which Mr. S.H has placed at the top of every important body in the state people of his tribe.