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    Default Please check this sentence, thnaks

    The customer is not accept the panel ship in next week. Please expedite the assembly and ship as many as possible

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    Default Re: Please check this sentence, thnaks

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    The customer is not accept the panel ship in next week. Please expedite the assembly and ship as many as possible
    Can you rephrase it Zoe? It's not clear what you want to say.

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    Default Re: Please check this sentence, thnaks

    Hi teacher,

    Is this better? Kindly review again. Thanks

    The customer is not accept the (spare) parts ship in next week. Please expedite the assemble and ship as many (quantity) as possible / ready


    Regards
    Zoe


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    Default Re: Please check this sentence, thnaks

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Hi teacher,

    Is this better? Kindly review again. Thanks

    The customer is not accept the (spare) parts ship in next week. Please expedite the assemble and ship as many (quantity) as possible / ready


    Regards
    Zoe

    No. Can you try again?

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    Default Re: Please check this sentence, thnaks

    Hi teacher,

    Sorry for my poor English. Please review the revision again. Thanks

    The customer will not accept shipment of the goods next week. Please expedite the assembly and ship as many as possible.

    Regards
    Zoe

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    Default Re: Please check this sentence, thnaks

    Hi Zoe

    "The customer cannot accommodate delivery of the spare parts being delayed to next week.
    Please reschedule production to meet their requirements and ship as many as possible as soon as they are ready
    ."

    Hope this helps
    R21
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