please check my informal letter to friend FCE student

[Ramandeept]

Dear Maria,

It is very nice to hear from you. How is your study going on? it is great news that you are going to learn my language. Don't be worried, i will help you as much as i can.

First, i want to let you know that it would be easier to learn French, if you come to France for few months. There are many learning centers,which could be best guidlines for you to learn quickly. Also we can spend some time together.

French grammer is a little complicated, but you will get it eventually. There are phrases, idioms,and lots of vocabulary to remenber. i think the best way to remember more words is by recording your voice in to tape. So you can listen them while travelling or cooking. One day they will fit in to your brain permanently.

i think i would be better to stop now,as i am running out of time.

Let me know how it goes.

Drop me a line soon.

Best of luck,
Iran

[luschen]

Hi, I am not a teacher, but I will make a few corrections. Make sure to capitalize the first word of every sentence as well as the word "I"

Dear Maria,

It is very nice to hear from you. How is your study going on? it is great news that you are going to learn my language. Don't be worried, i will help you as much as i can.

First, i want to let you know that it would be easier to learn French,{no comma here} if you come to France for few months. There are many learning centers,which could be best guidlines[would be the best way] for you to learn quickly. Also we can spend some time together.

French grammer[grammar] is a little complicated, but you will get it eventually. There are phrases, idioms,and lots of vocabulary to remenber[remember]. i think the best way to remember more words is by recording your voice in to[on] tape. So[Then] you can listen [to] them while travelling or cooking. One day they will fit in to your brain permanently.{This sentence is a little awkward}

i think i would be better to stop now,as i am running out of time.

Let me know how it goes.

Drop me a line soon.

Best of luck,
Iran