My eyes need more rest as I had a minor operation the day before. But I still can't leave my computer to learn more English because during thisextra day off of sickness.
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1. Is my writing correct?
2. How should I describe my attitude towards studies?
3. Shall I say operation or surgery?
4. What are the differences between operation and surgery?
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(Excuse me, I get to rest now, I feel sore on my eyes. Is this writing correct?)
ju
The first sentense is more or less OK, as to the second sentence, it's not clear at all what you mean. Could you explain it in simpler words?
My eyes need more rest as I had a minor operation the day before. But I still can't leave my computer to learn more English because during this extra day off of sickness.
I think you mean:
Although I had a minor operation yesterday and need to rest my eyes, I still need to learn more English. So I can't leave my computer.
The above sentence makes it clear that you are keen to continue your studies even though you don't feel well.
Surgery is just one kind of operation. You can use either one.
" I must rest now. My eyes feel sore. "