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[Zoe2008]

After pushing the factory, they can only finished approx 1000 pcs goods up to tomorrow. We have requested them ship them by DHL tomorrow night if inspection is passed to save time. The remained 1000 pcs goods will be shipped by next weekend.

[Route21]

Hi Zoe

After pushing the factory, they can only finish about 1000 pcs by tomorrow.

To save time, we have asked that they ship them by DHL tomorrow night, provided they pass inspection.

The remaining 1000 pcs goods will be shipped by next weekend.

Hope this helps
R21