Is the following sentence acceptable?
I have many secrets in my heart. Some of them are funny, and the others are conscience-stricken.
Last edited by Ashiuhto; 17-Apr-2011 at 15:36.
Doesn't work for me. A secret doesn't have any conscience to be stricken.
Originally Posted by Ashiuhto
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