past perfect

[Agnieszka4u]

Dear teacher .
Could you check my exercise please.

1. tom was furious with anna because she had told their friends his secret
2.she was fined £200 she had gone through the red light
3.he was 2 hours late for the wedding his car had broken down
4.he crawled out of the car lucky to escape with his life the car had began to burn

thank you so much.

[bhaisahab]

Dear teacher .
Could you check my exercise please.

1. tom was furious with anna because she had told their friends his secret
2.she was fined £200 she had gone through the red light
3.he was 2 hours late for the wedding his car had broken down
4.he crawled out of the car lucky to escape with his life the car had began to burn

thank you so much.

Welcome to the forums, Agneiszka. Try again, paying attention to correct capitalisation and punctuation.

[BobK]

You might also want to supply a few subordinating conjunctions (because, since, as ...)

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[kiwi man]

Dear teacher .
Could you check my exercise please.

1. tom was furious with anna because she had told their friends his secret
2.she was fined £200 she had gone through the red light
3.he was 2 hours late for the wedding his car had broken down
4.he crawled out of the car lucky to escape with his life the car had began to burn

thank you so much.

I don't know if I'm supposed to do this:

If I were you, this would be how I write these sentences.

1. tom was furious with anna because she had told their friends his secret

Tom was furious with Anna because she told their friends his secret.

2.she was fined £200 she had gone through the red light

She was fined £200 after she had gone through the red light.

3.he was 2 hours late for the wedding his car had broken down

He was 2 hours late for the wedding because his car got broken down.

4.he crawled out of the car lucky to escape with his life the car had began to burn

Luckily, he crawled out of the car so he could escape with his life after the car had began to burn.

All of my answers need to be verified, but I'm 85 percent positive that I'm correct.

[5jj]

I don't know if I'm supposed to do this

Well, no. As bhaisahab had asked Agnieszka4u to try again, it was not appropriate to offer your thoughts before she had tried again.

All of my answers need to be verified, but I'm 85 percent positive that I'm correct.

Some of them need to be corrected, not verified.

Please read the words at the top of this thread: "If you are not a teacher, you will need to state that clearly at the top of your post."