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Cas, that's how he did it. Click on Code. :D

Aleycris, you can also just space between paragraphs.

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  • There are a lot of things you miss when you live alone. No longer do you have someone to do the _______ and _________. When you live alone you have to do all your own ______ and _________. You have to _____ _____ _______. You have to ______ ______, and _____ ______ _____ _____ ___ ___ ______.

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There are a lot of things you miss when you live alone. No longer do you have someone to do the cooking and cleaning. When you live alone you have to do all your own washing and ironing. You have to shop for yourself. You have to be independent, and be able to take care of yourself.

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There are a lot of things you miss when you live alone. No longer do you have someone to do the cooking and cleaning. When you live alone you have to do all your own washing and ironing. You have to shop for yourself. You have to be independent, and able to take care of yourself.

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