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Hello,
Can you please help me by reading the following e-mails and let me know if I have written it correctly? I'm very new with English writing, I've never studied English before, so I get very nervous when I send emails to people. I appreciate your help.

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What: Lighthouse Training!

When: Thursday, September 22nd 8:00am to 5:00pm. Please arrive to the hotel around 7:00pm on Wednesday, September 21st. It's an all day session.

Where: Four Points by Sheraton near the Airport in Birmingham. It will be held in the training room “Lockheed.” Click on the link below for more details on hotel address and directions.

Sheraton - Birmingham
5216 Airport Highway
Birmingham, AL 35212
(205) 591-7900
Four Points Birmingham Hotels: Four Points by Sheraton Birmingham Airport - Hotel Rooms at fourpoints.com <http://www.starwoodhotels.com/fourpoints/search/hotel_detail.html?requestedChainCode=SI&requestedA ffiliationCode=4P&goToRooms=yes&lengthOfStay=1&num berOfRooms=1&numberOfAdults=1&arrivalDate=2005-02-23&departureDate=2005-02-24&rpoi=&propertyID=1517>

Attendees:
Rommel Fernandez
Andrea Musilunas
Adrian Hess
Chris Stegura
James Hooper
Kenny Burson
Sherry Bruno
Kyle Holmes
Shea Spiers

Air Travel Arrangements:
Please book your flights ASAP and no later than 5:00pm Monday, September 12th. If you fail to do so, it will be ticketed for you. Contact Christine Lardizabal <private.php?do=newpm&u=14419> [858-642-7346 or 800.511.3470, ext 7346] regarding any questions pertaining to your air travel. The after hours travel number is 1.800.447.4505. For those of you who are driving or who are unable to get a flight out on that night after 7:00pm, sleeping rooms will be accommodated for you at the same hotel.

Agenda and Outline:
Will be provided soon.

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Hi,
Please arrive around 11:00am on Monday, October 3rd. The meeting will start at noon. On Tuesday, the meeting will run from 8:00am to 5:00pm. Please have your luggages ready so that you can leave the hotel right after the meeting is over.

For transportations, you can either call the front desk at 404-261-7733 or call the yellow cap at 404-872-2600

Air Travel Arrangements:
Contact Christine Lardizabal <private.php?do=newpm&u=14419> [858-642-7346 or 800.511.3470, ext 7346] regarding any questions pertaining to your air travel. The after hours travel number is 1.800.447.4505.

Hotel accommodation and meeting location:
Embassy Suites Hotel Atlanta-Buckhead
3285 Peachtree Road
Atlanta, GA 30305
404-261-7733
Conference room # 1607
Embassy Suites Hotel Atlanta-Buckhead <http://www.embassysuites.com/en/es/hotels/index.jhtml?ctyhocn=ATLLXES>

Agenda:
Will be provided.

Misc.
Attire for the meeting is business casual.
Please let me know if you have any questions.
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Please arrive to- arrive at
For transportations- for transportation
Attire for the meeting- I'd use 'dress' instead of 'attire'
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