what's wrong with this sentences

[smiley]

hi, got your mail but i'm not sure if it's complete or cut. the message below is the entire mail that i have received from you.

[Casiopea]

Welcome.

Try,

Hi,

I got your e-mail but I'm not sure (if) I got it in its entirety/in its complete form. This is what I received:

Originally Posted by Casiopea

Welcome.

Try,

Hi,

I got your e-mail but I'm not sure (if) I got it in its entirety/in its complete form. This is what I received:

Doesn't in its entirety" sound a little out-of-place with "Hi"? Seems to mix register a little to abruptly.

How about:

Hi,

(I) got your mail, but I'm not sure if it's complete. This is what I received:

[Casiopea]

Knowledge is power.
Give 'em what you know; let 'em decide what's best. ;)

[smiley]

thanks for helping me with this one. any other suggestion?

[Casiopea]

What about?

I got your e-mail but I'm not sure I got the whole thing. Here's what I got:

[smiley]

hi. i have another question. how will i reply to this message, "i hope its alright to ask who the person behind mysteryman is", if i prefer to remain anonymous? if my purpose is just to help them with their love relationship. thanks.

Originally Posted by Casiopea

Knowledge is power.
Give 'em what you know; let 'em decide what's best. ;)

Oh no, please, Casi., teach them how to use different registers first and then set them free.

Originally Posted by Casiopea

What about?

I got your e-mail but I'm not sure I got the whole thing. Here's what I got:

You've got "got" fever.