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    Default Please correct my sentence, thanks

    Why the vessel delayed to 08 June which is two week late as original schedule. It is unacceptable. Please complain the carrier and send us delay letter to the customer.

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    Default Re: Please correct my sentence, thanks

    Hi Gillnetter,

    Thanks for your advice. Please see my correction

    We cannot accept the vessel delayed to 08 June which is two weeks late as per original schedule. We need your explanation and please request the vessel delay notice / letter from the carrier for us to the customer.

    Send us delay letter to the customer? What does that mean?
    - The carrier will provide the delay notice or letter once the vessel cannot catch up scheduled vessel. We need the letter to customer to prove about that.

    Regards
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    Default Re: Please correct my sentence, thanks

    Hi Gillnetter,

    Yes, you are correct.

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