2 questions on sentences structure

[diplomacy]

which one is correct? and why?

1.Fortunately,...some......or............many..... ..the team could win although the captain not their.

2...every or ....any........ staff should have a permit to come in.



thanks.

[bhaisahab]

which one is correct? and why?

1.Fortunately,...some......or............many..... ..the team could win although the captain not their.

2...every or ....any........ staff should have a permit to come in.



thanks.

#1 doesn't make any sense. #2 would be better as, "All staff must have an entry permit".