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as_the_story_goes · #1 (**permalink**) 13-Sep-2005, 06:40

Hi,

Please help me with this sentence.

"There are three reasons why Miss Othman likes the Simpang Bedok Hawker Centre: first, she likes the great service she receives; second, she likes that patrons are greeted with a smile and third, the waiters give her a menu."

Thanks in advance.

Tdol · #2 (**permalink**) 13-Sep-2005, 08:18

What help are you looking for? The sentence is correct, though I would put a semi-colon after 'smile' to keep the list items separate.

as_the_story_goes · #3 (**permalink**) 14-Sep-2005, 00:13

Thanks for the info. I hate using so much punctuation.

Tdol · #4 (**permalink**) 14-Sep-2005, 01:30

I'm afraid we have to use it from time to time.

as_the_story_goes · #5 (**permalink**) 16-Sep-2005, 00:03

Unfortunately


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