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[gh1jk]

Hi,

Please correct the text below if needed.

'A long time had passed since one constructive political theory which completely abolishes authority appeared. Of course, that is the anarchism.
Nowadays, figurative meanings of the terms relating to the anarchism have been ridiculed, so we can easily conclude that people require authority, and the authority require people too.'

Thanks

[bwkcaj_ca]

'A long time had passed since one constructive political theory which completely abolisheds authority appeared. Of course, that is the anarchism.
Nowadays, the figurative meanings of the terms relating to the anarchism have been ridiculed, so we can easily conclude that people require authority, and that the authority requires people too.'

[Mannysteps]

Not a teacher

Consider this model:

'A long time has passed since a constructive political theory abolishing the need for authority appeared: anarchism. However, although logical and based on mutual responsability, the concept has been systematically ridiculed and perverted, so as to convince us that people need authority, when, in fact, it is authority that needs people.'


If your aim is to attack anarchy, just make the necessary changes.


I hope it helps.


M.

[gh1jk]

Thanks.

[gh1jk]

And this one:

'Water is the part of the fundamental substance - protoplasm.
A healthy person can drink up to 48 glasses of water a day.
Clean water (containing only oxygen and hydrogen atoms) is pH neutral.
Water dissolves more substances than any other liquid.'

Thanks.

[Mannysteps]

A pleasure.

It was quite late where I am, so I made some tyuping mistakes. I have now corrected them.

M.