A doubt

[candeline]

I have to send an e-mail to my teacher with an article that i have already corrected,I want to write something to her and I am not sure if it is okay:

"I hope this time it is better"
or
"I hope it is better now"

which one is the correct? or are both wrong? help!!

Thanks!

[emsr2d2]

I have to send an e-mail to my teacher with an article that I have already corrected. I want to write something to her and I am not sure if it is okay:

"I hope this time it is better"
or
"I hope it is better now"

Which one is the correct? Or are both wrong? Help!!

Thanks!

They're both fine. You could also say "Here is my amended article. I hope this one's better than my last attempt!"