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  1. 23-Jun-2011, 00:38 #1
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    is this sentence correct?

    The ATS conference may take place December 10 to 15, 2011 and if it does not proceed, we will be happy to assist you and if your company wants to book any of the mentioned dates for your conference.
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    Default Re: is this sentence correct? "If"

    Quote Originally Posted by thomas615 View Post
    is this sentence correct?

    The ATS conference may take place December 10 to 15, 2011 and if it does not proceed, we will be happy to assist you and if your company wants to book any of the mentioned dates for your conference.
    ***** NOT A TEACHER *****


    Hello, Thomas:

    (1) I am certainly not a good writer, but I most respectfully and gently

    suggest that most ordinary people like me would not understand

    what you are trying to say.

    (2) I have read it several times. Do you want to express the following:


    The ATS conference is scheduled for December 10 - 15, 2011.

    We would be very happy to book your company for any of those

    dates and to assist you in case the conference is postponed or

    canceled.



    Sincerely,


    James
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    Thank you for your help. I really learn a lot from this forum
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