- 1 Post By emsr2d2
"Three days ago, Linda choked on a fishbone and she nearly had to be hospitalized. But miraculously, she took it out by herself in the end."
Does this sentence have a natural conversational tone?
Thank you so much
It's OK. The only thing I don't understand is when she took the fishbone out. When was "in the end"? After the paramedics decided she didn't need to be hospitalised? Two days after she nearly choked?
Originally Posted by namloan
I think I would use something like "Miraculously, she was able to remove the fishbone herself before any permanent damage was done".
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