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Button down your ears!
Cute, if incorrect, sentence.
"I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned them under my chin."
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Re: Button down your ears!
lol...M56 that's a great example of an unintentional ambiguity; the verb 'buttoned' obviously meant by the writer to refer to the noun 'flaps' may be read as referring to 'ears', which makes up the joke...Cute, indeed, particularly when you try to imagine a person buttoning their ears under the chin...hehe...
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Re: Button down your ears!
Wow, that's really nice:)
Could you tell me if such a sentence is actually incorrect? Is it a language mistake to write so ambigously?
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Re: Button down your ears!

Originally Posted by
skoczna Wow, that's really nice:)
Could you tell me if such a sentence is actually incorrect? Is it a language mistake to write so ambigously?
I guess that would depend on whether you got the right message across.
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Re: Button down your ears!
Cute, if incorrect, sentence.
"I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned them under my chin."
How would you correct this "incorrect" sentence to avoid the ambiguity, may I ask?
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Re: Button down your ears!

Originally Posted by
Temico How would you correct this "incorrect" sentence to avoid the ambiguity, may I ask?
How about the following:
I had a wool hat with flaps that, when buttoned under my chin, covered my ears.
All the best, 
TK
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Re: Button down your ears!

Originally Posted by
Tomasz Klimkiewicz How about the following:
I had a wool hat with flaps that, when buttoned under my chin, covered my ears.
All the best,
TK
I like it.
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Re: Button down your ears!

Originally Posted by
skoczna "I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned them under my chin."
Could you tell me if such a sentence is actually incorrect? Is it a language mistake to write so ambigously?
In English, pronouns refer to the closest noun. In our example sentence, the closest noun to them is ears,
EX: I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears (noun) when I buttoned them (pronoun) under my chin.
which reads,
EX: ?I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned my ears under my chin.
To correct it, move the referent closer, like this,
EX: I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned the flaps under my chin.
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Re: Button down your ears!

Originally Posted by
Casiopea In English, pronouns refer to the closest noun. In our example sentence, the closest noun to them is ears,
EX: I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears (noun) when I buttoned them (pronoun) under my chin.
which reads,
EX: ?I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned my ears under my chin.
To correct it, move the referent closer, like this,
EX: I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned the flaps under my chin.
Oooer! Don't like that one at all. Flps x 2? Not for me.
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Re: Button down your ears!
How about this way:-
"My wool hat had flaps which could be buttoned under my chin to cover my ears."
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