Cute, if incorrect, sentence.
"I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned them under my chin."
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lol...M56 that's a great example of an unintentional ambiguity; the verb 'buttoned' obviously meant by the writer to refer to the noun 'flaps' may be read as referring to 'ears', which makes up the joke...Cute, indeed, particularly when you try to imagine a person buttoning their ears under the chin...hehe...![]()
Wow, that's really nice:)
Could you tell me if such a sentence is actually incorrect? Is it a language mistake to write so ambigously?
I guess that would depend on whether you got the right message across.Originally Posted by skoczna
How would you correct this "incorrect" sentence to avoid the ambiguity, may I ask?Cute, if incorrect, sentence.
"I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned them under my chin."
How about the following:Originally Posted by Temico
I had a wool hat with flaps that, when buttoned under my chin, covered my ears.
All the best,
TK
I like it.Originally Posted by Tomasz Klimkiewicz
In English, pronouns refer to the closest noun. In our example sentence, the closest noun to them is ears,Originally Posted by skoczna
EX: I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears (noun) when I buttoned them (pronoun) under my chin.
which reads,
EX: ?I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned my ears under my chin.
To correct it, move the referent closer, like this,
EX: I had a wool hat with flaps that covered my ears when I buttoned the flaps under my chin.
Originally Posted by Casiopea
Oooer! Don't like that one at all. Flps x 2? Not for me.
How about this way:-
"My wool hat had flaps which could be buttoned under my chin to cover my ears."