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    LearnerP is offline Newbie
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    Is the following correct in terms of sentence structure?:

    "Thank you for pointing out the errors. I have forwarded your letter on to David, who will be able to rectify them.

    Thanks in advance.

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    Default Re: Is this correct?

    Delete on and it's fine.

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    Default Re: Is this correct?

    Thanks for that. I wasn't sure if the structure was correct because of the two objects in the second sentence "(letter" and "them"). I wasn't sure if I should refer to the errors as "them" because the first object in the second sentence is "letter" and not "errors". I hope that makes sense..

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