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    Default Please corrrect my sentence, thanks

    How many goods have been finished and passed your inspection? Please send us your QC inspection report today for our final inspection tomorrow

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    Default Re: Please corrrect my sentence, thanks

    Fine, but maybe too many 'inspection's. You could drop the 2nd one (unless there are other sorts of QC report), and maybe change the 3rd - 'Please send us your QC report today, ready for our final check tomorrow'...? But it's perfectly clear as it is.

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