doubt in the sentence

[kiranjyo]

Hi

Can anyone tell me the sentence i have given below is correct or not?




I have called Tina and she told me if we can get an AC for her it will be a big help for her. Also I have mentioned the groceries she had mentioned


Coriander powder, Chilly powder etc..

[BobK]

Hi

Can anyone tell me the sentence i have given below is correct or not?




I have called Tina and she told me if we can get an AC for her it will be a big help for her. Also I have mentioned the groceries she had mentioned


Coriander powder, Chilly powder etc..

I nearly deleted this thread as a duplicate. Please use different titles for different questions; and it helps if your title refers specifically to the nature of the problem.

Your sentence might be correct, but you probably don't need all those differnt tenses. To know whether you do, we'd need some context: for example, did Tina list the ingredients in the phone call (=> simple past) or in the phone call did she just reiterate what she had said in a previous conversation (=> past perfect).

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[kiranjyo]

BobK thanks for the reply.


Can you check this sentence too,



Ryan asked me if he can start a Bank account, is it possible to tranfer his salary through Netbanking?

[5jj]

Ryan asked me if he can start a B bank account, . i Is it possible to tranfer his salary through Netbanking?

'Can' is fine; 'could' would also be fine.