Request the teacher to please check my post

[Gaurav_2010]

Hi Friends :) I have written a short bio about me. I just want you people to please correct this grammatically.

Many thanks to you people for your help and guidance.

--------------- Bio About me------------------
Hi everyone :) I express my self as an emotional, sensitive, and a fun-loving person. I’m a sort of person who listens to his true feelings and go with his natural sentiments. I absolutely appreciate and love people who are soft hearted and friendly.
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[Raymott]

Hi Friends :) I have written a short bio about me. I just want you people to please correct this grammatically.

Many thanks to you people for your help and guidance.

--------------- Bio About me------------------
Hi everyone :) I express my self as an emotional, sensitive, and a fun-loving person. I’m a sort of person who listens to his true feelings and goes with his natural sentiments. I absolutely appreciate and love people who are soft-hearted and friendly.
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That's a description of your personality. It's not a bio(graphy), which is a brief story of your life.

[Gaurav_2010]

Thanks for the reply Raymott :) I appreciate your help!