direct , indirect speach

[arzgol]

Are my sentences proper English? Could you please fix my sentences.

Whenever, I have had a bad day at work, at home I try to hide my emotion, but it is enough for my mother to see me. Very soon, she will ask me if they bothered badly me at work ( did they bother badly you at work?).


Thank you so much for your reply.

[5jj]

arzgol,
If your first thread hasn't received a response, simply boost it. Please do not start a new thread with a question you have already posted. I am now going to your original thread to see if I can help.