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to take some away by buying them
Given the following sentence:
In the last years, Spanish fantastic cinema is showing up as one of worldwide most creative, personal and stimulating offers, quite enough to attract Hollywood’s interest in our young talents and even to take some away by buying them
Do you find the last part is correct: "even to take some away by buying them", meaning "attracting young promises with job and money?
Any other objection as for the paragraph?
Thank You
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Re: to take some away by buying them

Originally Posted by
Bushwhacker
Given the following sentence:
In the last years, Spanish fantastic cinema is showing up as one of worldwide most creative, personal and stimulating offers, quite enough to attract Hollywood’s interest in our young talents and even to take some away by buying them
Do you find the last part is correct: "even to take some away by buying them", meaning "attracting young promises with job and money?
Any other objection as for the paragraph?
Thank You
"Spanish fantastic cinema is showing up as one of worldwide most creative, personal and stimulating offers," It's not clear what you want to say here.
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Re: to take some away by buying them

Originally Posted by
bhaisahab
"Spanish fantastic cinema is showing up as one of worldwide most creative, personal and stimulating offers," It's not clear what you want to say here.
I mean that Spanish fantastic cinema is being so good that its professionals (directors, screenwriters, technicians...) are being hired by Hollywood
Thank You
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Re: to take some away by buying them

Originally Posted by
Bushwhacker
I mean that Spanish fantastic cinema is being so good that its professionals (directors, screenwriters, technicians...) are being hired by Hollywood
Thank You
Try starting it "In recent years...."
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Re: to take some away by buying them

Originally Posted by
bhaisahab
Try starting it "In recent years...."
Thank You, but what about the remaining?
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Re: to take some away by buying them

Originally Posted by
Bushwhacker
Thank You, but what about the remaining?
"In recent years "Spanish fantastic cinema" has been so good that...."
Now you.
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Re: to take some away by buying them

Originally Posted by
bhaisahab
"In recent years "Spanish fantastic cinema" has been so good that...."
Now you.
How about this new proposal:
Lately, Spanish fantastic cinema is showing up as one of worldwide most creative, personal and stimulating offers, quite enough to attract Hollywood’s interest in our young talents as far as hiring them
Is it correct? Understandable?
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